The old stair well was dark and cold. On the way up, each board would creak and moan. The hairs on my skin would stand up tall and my mind thought things I should not know. At the top, there was a door—turn the knob and the fear was gone.
The room was light and full of space, with dabs of white, red, green and blue. A large place made for the kids to play, run, nap, and dream. Like clay to the mold and paint to the brush, this was the place to be if one were three or four. Some books, toys, chairs, and a couch to fill the place. But to get here, meant I had to go up the old stair well.
My first years were spent in that room, it was the bright spot of my days. Light and love came to my heart and I smile when I think back in time. I met peers who felt its charm and too think back with much praise. There is one thing to which we can all point; the odd sense we felt when we went up the old stair well.
Years have come and gone, and I went back to see, the room on that side of the door. The old stair well was still dark and cold and each board still gave a creak and a moan. But this time, I felt no fear as I went up the stairs, just a sense of home.
The knob a bit tight, and yet it did turn and gave way to the sight of the old room. The cob webs have grown. The reds, blues, and greens are now dull, and the toys and books are all but gone. An old chair still sat by the wall and the light still made the room bright and warm.
Tears fall. I close my eyes. I think back to how it once was. I say out loud, “I love this place, just up the old stair well.”
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This was written for GBE2 writing group. This week’s challenge was to write something using all single syllables. Phew. I think I did it? We’ll see :)
13 comments:
What a lovely place to play!! Great job Jenn. ♥
Kathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Good job! It's not easy telling a story all in single syllable words!!
I remember a hallway from my childhood that was like your stairway. When I'd get about half way down that hall, I always felt something and usually ran the rest of the way.
@Kathy, Thank you so much for your comment!!
@Word Nerd, yes I am still catching mistakes. It is okay, it was a great exercise. I always ran up the stairs. CREEPY!! I just didn't have enough syllables to tell it like it is :)
Oh Jen this was lovely. I loved your take on this weeks challenge! This was so beautifully written. Im so glad you shared it !!!
I am not at all surprised that you were able to do this one and create such a lovely tale from a memory at the same time.
I love it. Great job.
Lovely story! Nicely done!
Great job! One would not even notice the syllable factor if they were not looking for it, because the story supersedes everything else.
the beauty of years I adore this
When my mother died, we sold the old place with all the memories. **sniff**
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Yowza! This took me on a journey up those stairs with every word. It's really great, Jenn.
Nice write up Jenn! I thought it was horror initially. But then it started sounding sweet and sad later. Excellent piece of work. If I were to write this, I'd made it horrifying. LOL :)
We all have these places we have attachments to. Mine was the old convent I was schooled in, now turned into a shopping complex. But the structure is still there! I still enjoy a good cup of coffee at the place too. Thanks for sharing, Jenn.
I think you nailed it, Jenn! All in single syllables! Cool work!!
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